tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post2663945694415725720..comments2024-01-02T16:42:15.732-05:00Comments on Redlines and Deadlines: Wednesday Writing Tips: Remove RedundancyECPI Editorshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00569261288668237013noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post-71702643352821156812012-07-04T14:41:07.181-04:002012-07-04T14:41:07.181-04:00I just tangled with a co-author (not Naomi) about ...I just tangled with a co-author (not Naomi) about this. He had the guy reaching his hand into his jacket pocket and "a whistle from a man's lips" written in.<br /><br />My first response was "I don't think he's limber enough to reach withe his feet. And I don't want to know what else he could be whistling with!"Angelia Sparrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13195112449945205248noreply@blogger.com