tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post6385775676655145686..comments2024-01-02T16:42:15.732-05:00Comments on Redlines and Deadlines: Wednesday Writing Tips: Head HoppingECPI Editorshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00569261288668237013noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post-43829364612561164442012-07-14T02:33:11.737-04:002012-07-14T02:33:11.737-04:00Rhea - isn't that the truth! We've been co...Rhea - isn't that the truth! We've been conditioned now to think it's wrong and there's no way back!Barbara Elsborghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15825994197656747262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post-14927954319189148582012-07-12T22:04:13.278-04:002012-07-12T22:04:13.278-04:00It never bothered me as a reader until I learned i...It never bothered me as a reader until I learned it was wrong.Rhea Rhodanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00965029684851153673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post-64804294062754202162012-07-12T19:47:43.648-04:002012-07-12T19:47:43.648-04:00Excellent points here. Excessive head-hopping is s...Excellent points here. Excessive head-hopping is so distracting that even the best stories become hard to read.Julienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8983687699975451453.post-89285615859594327982012-07-11T11:42:34.199-04:002012-07-11T11:42:34.199-04:00And I tell you it's the thing critiquers of yo...And I tell you it's the thing critiquers of your work will jump on, and yet 'big' authors seem to get away with it. It really grates with me when I see it being done. Husband is so tired of lying next to me in bed and I yell - she's swapped POV in the same paragraph. He's a saint to put up with me.Barbara Elsborghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15825994197656747262noreply@blogger.com